Good Weekend

Okay, good weekend with nice progression on both Galileo War and Sorcerer’s Carnival.

Galileo War Chapter 12

Fleshed out the action scenes for the main battle. Worked on pinning down the emotions for the hospital scene. Annihilated a few telling paragraph’s and filled in with some showing (hopefully). Tonight I want to double check the transitions and make sure they’re smooth. Then it’s all about the grammar and final editing.

Sorcerer’s Carnival

Focused on transitions and modifying POV’s in merged scenes. Still struggling with outlining the Sorcerer motivations, but I think I might have that worked out with some internal dialogue. I’m going to focus on that tonight.

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